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Post by newestconvert on Aug 26, 2004 18:56:09 GMT -5
Brooke, confused and disgusted with Ridge's demanding, egotistical ways, goes over to see Nick on his boat. Felicia is there preparing dinner for Nick so Brooke feels uncomfortable. She asksNick if she can borrow the row boat..she needs some alone time to think. He helps her cast off and watches her row off to a nearby cove. During dinner with felicia, Nick appears distracted (he's thinking Brooke looked upset) and his NOAA weather alert device goes off warning of approaching severe thunderstorms. As the announcement ends thunder is heard. Meanwhile Brooke is floating in the cove, re-living tender moments with Nick on the water. Nick borrows a neighbor's launch and catches up to Brook who is huddled in the boat as the storm breaks. He helps her onto the launch, ties up the rowboat and pulls brook (who is shaken) into his arms. he asks her if it is alright.. she says NOW it is. They return to Nick's boat and brooke, who is soaked, tells Nick she needs to get home. On the way home, the storm intensifies.. in a flash of lightening she sees a white stag (a sure sign of change) in the roadway and swerves.. crashing her car and getting a serious head wound in the process. Needless to say...she is in a coma and when she comes out.. can remember nothing, no one. Until she sees Nick and flashes back to that scene of him holding her comforting her during the storm. She recognizes that he is someone who meant a lot to her and she although she doesn't know him 100% she tells him she thinks he must be her love.. her true love! Over the next few months we see brooke struggle to regain her memory...which she never gets back in total. During this time, Ridge is the jerk that he is, demanding she come home. but Brooke can't because she doesn't have those feelings for him any more, and he (R) in fact frightens her. meanwhile, Nick helps her find a home (all the while torn over his involvement with felicia!!) and the doctors tell her that she probably will never get all of her memory back and even if she did, her experiences since her accident (such wonderful, warm ones with nick) are as much a part of her as her previous life. ... nick finally can't resist his attraction to brooke who has now completely fallen in love with Nick and he let's Felicia down gently.. she, in the meantime has fallen big time for deacon!Oh and since brooke can't remember much about fashion, she takes up painting. well.. that's how it happens in my world!
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Post by DotD on Aug 26, 2004 19:16:28 GMT -5
I wanna live in your world! Why don't you put it into a nice fan fiction and come over to our board and post it there LOL! I'd love to hear more of this story!
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Post by marina on Aug 26, 2004 19:22:07 GMT -5
I must say, newestconvert that I like your version of how the story should proceed. Now if only the writers would to come to our board and read what you have written and decide to go with that. I keep wondering why those writers who make big bucks to be on the writing team cannot come up with a good SL with romance like you, Dot and the other fanfiction writers. What is wrong with them?
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Post by newestconvert on Aug 26, 2004 19:34:55 GMT -5
Is there a fan fiction board? I am really new to this site and am sort of fumbling my way around. My imagination has been working overtime playing out a story line to get brooke to come to her senses... I have a lot more details in my mind but i am one awful typist!! Should I be posting my fantasies someplace else? Thanks!
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Post by DotD on Aug 26, 2004 19:38:25 GMT -5
Is there a fan fiction board? I am really new to this site and am sort of fumbling my way around. My imagination has been working overtime playing out a story line to get brooke to come to her senses... I have a lot more details in my mind but i am one awful typist!! Should I be posting my fantasies someplace else? Thanks! No, fantasys are fine for here! I was just saying I'd LOVE to see a fan fiction from that! Hmmm, maybe I need to start another one! Anyway, this is our Fan Fiction Board. Please come over and check it out! 66.37.7.139/plus/plus.mirage?who=kaymcgee
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Post by newestconvert on Aug 26, 2004 21:03:11 GMT -5
DotD, thanks for the link. I'd love to put my fiction in there and expand on it. i'll try to get to that this weekend! thanks for the tip.. I love reading the other ideas! simply irresistable!
NC
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Post by mickey2 on Aug 26, 2004 21:12:27 GMT -5
Welcome to the board Newestconvert. Loved your fantasy
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Post by icebabe on Aug 26, 2004 22:06:23 GMT -5
I LOVE your scenario, newestconvert!!! Too bad there are no writers on B&B who can come up with such a great storyline! Linda C.
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Post by Sleek on Aug 27, 2004 7:39:30 GMT -5
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Post by Ginster on Aug 27, 2004 14:26:47 GMT -5
Awesome!!!! In your world I have Bricky I want more!!!!!!!
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Post by Shonagon on Aug 27, 2004 16:13:37 GMT -5
I love the fanfiction site! You guys have such good ideas and are so amusing, and put so much work into writing! It's lovely to see the B&B characters get what's coming to them, both good and bad.
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Post by Remex on Aug 27, 2004 17:18:24 GMT -5
I want to join this world too!
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Post by Patty on Aug 27, 2004 19:02:28 GMT -5
Welcome newestconvert to TSM I too want to live in your world, it's lovely and continue with your writing....
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Post by swan on Aug 28, 2004 7:19:05 GMT -5
I love your story, newestconvert. Maybe you can post it on the official board for B&B. Bell needs all the help he can get.
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Post by Laurie on Aug 28, 2004 21:18:23 GMT -5
Welcome newestconvert, I love your storyline. Are you going to continue with it?
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Post by Gee on Aug 28, 2004 21:40:55 GMT -5
Welcome newestconvert and I hope you have a great time posting with us here TSM.
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Post by newestconvert on Aug 29, 2004 17:49:12 GMT -5
ok.. I gave you the outline... here are the details... in my world.
Brooke, distraught over recent events with Ridge, decides she needs some time to think her marriage through. Not realizing she is in need of a friendly face, she heads over to Nick’s boat in the late afternoon. She arrives, knocks, and Nick answers the door. Brooke is about to ask Nick for a shoulder when she catches sight of Felicia in the kitchen preparing dinner. Nick seems a bit uncomfortable to have Brooke find Felicia so ensconced in his home and Brooke is suddenly equally as unnerved by Felicia’s presence. She quickly asks Nick to borrow his rowboat so she can have a little “alone” time. Nick agrees and helps her push off, telling her not to go far. She smiles whimsically as she rows slowly toward a lovely private cove she and Nick once enjoyed together. Nick watches her for a time, deep in thought and then returns to the kitchen area and begins helping Felicia prepare a salad to go with their spaghetti dinner. Felicia slyly asks what it was that Brooke wanted and Nick replies that she came for the rowboat but that he thinks she came more for a friendly face. Felicia, snidely comments that she has a loving husband for that. Nick doesn’t seem to hear her reply and is again deep in thought. A while later as they set the table, Nick’s NOAA alert system begins to beep warning of fast approaching severe thunderstorms. The first peal of thunder rings out as he quickly goes up on deck to see if Brooke is on her way back. He doesn’t see her at all as the sky continues to darken and the water begins to churn. Meanwhile, Brook has been floating quietly on the water reliving a boat trip and picnic she had with Nick a few months before. She seems to be in her own little world with a dreamy yet sad look on her face and doesn’t notice the approaching storm. She is jolted out of her reverie as thunder peals and the wind picks up. The sky quickly darkens and the sky opens up before Brooke can do more than begin to paddle back. She is quickly overcome by fear as she realizes her boat and her strength are no match for such a dangerous storm. Nick, realizing Brooke must be in trouble, tells Felicia he’ll be back shortly and he takes off to borrow a launch and find Brooke. Felicia watches from the deck of Nick’s boat with a sour look on her face… muttering that Brooke is a foolish woman. Nick struggles with the launch in the storm deathly afraid that Brooke may have already capsized in the rising swell of waves. He spies her through the downpour and pulls up alongside the rowboat. Nick helps a shaking, terrified and very wet Brooke onto the Launch and quickly ties up the rowboat. As thunder peals loudly overhead, he sees Brooke flinch and realizes she is terrified by the viciousness of the storm. Nick pulls her into his arms and holds her close. He asks her, lips brushing her forehead if she is ok. Brooke burrows into his arms and replies yes, she is NOW. Another peal of thunder and flash of lightening reminds them that they are not out of danger and they break apart. After what seems to be a lifetime, Nick brings the launch alongside his boat and ties up. He helps Brooke up onto the deck and begins to pull her inside. Felicia looks up from the stove as the two enter and tells Nick it’s about 5 minutes until dinner is ready. Felicia gives Brooke a rather challenging look and Brooke once again feels highly uncomfortable and even embarrassed. Nick tells Brooke he’ll rustle up some dry clothes for her but before he can move to do so, she tells him to never mind, her car has leather seats and she had better get home before people start to worry. She can’t seem to say Ridge’s name at this point and quickly turns to leave. Felicia calls out for Brooke to give her love to her loving husband, Felicia’s brother. Brooke walks out without looking back, calling thank you to Nick. She gets into her car as Nick watches and drives off as the storm gets a second wind and intensifies…<br>
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Post by idi on Aug 29, 2004 17:53:55 GMT -5
Hey newestconvert! Throw your ideas the writers' way. They could use the help!
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Post by newestconvert on Aug 29, 2004 18:29:48 GMT -5
Meanwhile, Ridge returns from Forrester to find Brooke is not home. He wonders where she has gotten to and reflects that she must be off moping somewhere. He admits to himself that he hasn’t been very understanding of late especially about Rick and Caitlin. He has even sided with hector over his wife on the issue and has refused to discuss the issue further with Brooke. He walks to the window looking for Brooke’s car as the storm intensifies. Getting more unnerved by the minute that Brooke hasn’t appeared, Ridge moves to the phone to call around and locate her. The scene flashes to Brook driving in the storm still a little distracted by flashbacks of nick holding her. She knows it is wrong to have felt so strongly..but it felt like coming home. It is raining extremely hard, has gotten very dark and windy. Brooke is leaning toward the windshield trying to see thru the pounding rain. Suddenly there is a very bright flash of lightening and Brooke sees a white stag standing in the middle of the road. (White stags are traditionally signs of change in one’s life). Brooke swerves the car, accidentally hitting the gas momentarily and gathering momentum. Her car slides off the road into a deep ditch and hits a tree. She hits the windshield and falls back unconscious. Her car has landed in the ditch in a position that leaves it almost impossible to see from the road…. The scene moves to Nick’s boat as Felicia and Nick are finishing dinner. Felicia has been chatting nonstop, trying to get Nick to engage but it is evident that his thoughts are elsewhere. Suddenly the phone rings. It is Ridge who, having called everyone else looking for Brooke, is calling on the off chance that Brooke may have stopped in to see his sister. Ridge doesn’t believe Brooke would stop to see Nick but it’s worth a try. He asks Nick about Brooke. Nick tells Ridge that Brooke had been there earlier to take out the rowboat. Ridge thinks this is strange but Nick tells him that many people find comfort in the sea. Ridge, unable to accept that Brooke needs comfort, asks when she left. Nick glances at the clock and says it was over an hour ago. She should have been home long ago. Ridge hangs up and both men look worried. Ridge decides to speak to Nick personally about Brooke’s visit. He has a feeling there was more to it than Nick let on. He drives over to Nick’s, unknowingly passing by Brooke’s car in the ditch. He arrives at the boat and walks in on Nick and Felicia doing dishes. Ridge demands to know about Brooke’s visit. Nick, calmly explains the rowboat, launch and storm, leaving out the moment he and Brooke shared out on the water. Nick mentions that Brooke seemed disturbed and not much like a happy bride. Ridge takes a step threateningly toward Nick when his cell phone goes off. It is the police who have finally found Brooke’s car. They explain to Ridge that she has been in an accident and has not regained consciousness. She is being transported to the hospital and he may want to get there as quickly as possible. Nick, realizes that Brooke has been in an accident from Ridge mentioning hospital, how bad.. etc on the phone. As Ridge hangs up and heads to the door Nick grabs his arm and asks, almost begs, to know what is going on. Ridge tells Nick and Felicia that Brooke has been in an accident and it doesn’t look good. The three of them head for the door en route to the hospital. Stay tuned for more... in my world
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Post by marina on Aug 29, 2004 18:37:06 GMT -5
Hey newestconvert, You do have great ideas and I like your scenario very much. Your version is so much more better than that put up by B&B, which sucks. I am waiting impatiently till you post more of what happens in your world. Please, do hurry.
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Post by AK on Aug 29, 2004 21:52:47 GMT -5
WELCOME I love the way you think and write
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Post by newestconvert on Aug 30, 2004 19:20:46 GMT -5
The scene changes to hospital emergency room. Ridge rushes in and demands to know where his wife is and what is happening. Nick and Felicia arrive on his heels trying to soften Ridges abrupt demands. The nurse tells them a doctor will be with them shortly, to please sit down. Ridge is irate and pacing, obviously upset. Nick moves to the waiting room window and looks out, not really seeing the scene outside, his mind is on Brooke. Felicia walks to Nick and touches his arm, trying to understand his feelings. Nick puts his hand over hers but doesn’t turn from the window. The emergency room doctor comes into the waiting room asking for Mr. Forrester. Ridge steps forward and Nick quickly moves to his side. The doctor gives Nick a questioning look and Nick explains that he is a very close friend of Brooke’s. The doctor tells them that Brooke’s condition is serious and that she is in a coma. She has a serious head wound and possibly a fractured skull. They are currently taking x-rays and checking for internal injuries. At a minimum, she has suffered a severe concussion and severe bruising of the upper body because the airbag did not deploy. Ridge asks what exactly all of this means and the doctor says that if she wakes up, there could be some serious changes she will have to deal with. Nick asks what kind of changes?. The doctor explains that often, people with these types of head injuries experience major life changes, sometimes physical, sometimes mental. That is if they wake up at all. Ridge just stares at the doctor not able to believe brooke may not wake up. Nick asks when they can see her. The doctor replies that she will be moved to ICU after her tests have been completed. Immediate family will be able to visit her then. The doctor stresses that the sooner she regains consciousness the better. Nick thanks the doctor as the three head to the elevator to take them to the ICU.
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Post by newestconvert on Aug 30, 2004 19:59:07 GMT -5
Hours later, the doctor enters the ICU waiting room. Ridge, Nick and Felicia have been joined by Eric, Rick, Bridget, Stephanie, Massimo and Jackie who they called in the intervening hours. The group huddles around the doctor who explains that Brooke is now in her room in ICU. He explains that Brooke’s skull was not fractured, that is the good news. However, her brain is severely bruised and they all need to pray that there is no subsequent swelling. The doctor suggests they all go home and get some rest. By tomorrow Brooke will be able to have more visitors and in fact encourages them to visit, albeit briefly, and talk to her while they are with her. The more stimulus her brain gets the better. He explains that Ridge may have 5 minutes with Brooke tonight, no more. Stephanie hugs Ridge who is finding her sympathy hard to take. Ridge goes off to see her as the others leave. Nick asks Stephanie to see Felicia home. There is something he has to do before he can leave. Cut to Brooke’s room as Ridge enters. He is stunned at how small and defenseless she appears lying in the bed hooked up to tubes and monitors beeping. Her lightly touches the bandage on her head and tears fill his eyes. Although afraid to touch her lest he hurt her, he gently touches his lips to his head. He says “Logan, please don’t leave me now.. I love you.. I need you. Your children love you and need you. Come back to us…please!”<br>The nurse comes in and tells Ridge his time is up. She tells him to go home, see his kids, get some rest. Brooke will need him in the coming days. Ridge leaves with a last glance at Brooke. Nick watches Ridge leave Brooke’s room and then sees the night nurse leave as well. He quickly slips into the room and goes to Brooke. He gently lifts Brooke’s hand to his lips and kisses her fingers. He then buries his face in her hand, overcome with emotion. He lifts his head and softly says to Brooke “ You’ve got to hang in there, Brooke. We love you and need you. I love you and need you. I can’t live without you. Come home Brooke, Come home! I’m waiting,” As he whispers “come home, I’m waiting,” Nick has his eyes closed. He misses Brooke’s eyelids flutter at his words. Nick kisses her forehead and slips out the door.
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Post by DotD on Aug 30, 2004 20:20:29 GMT -5
Oh how I wish! But Brooke has to know both men and freely choose Nick, this accident just opens her eyes! More please!
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Post by JazyJ on Aug 30, 2004 20:56:36 GMT -5
Wow, newestconvert, I am loving this story, but I have to agree with my girl Dot. She has to know both men so her choice will be crystal clear. Having said that though, I am willing to sit back and enjoy your world. Please continue.
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