Good or Bad, It's My Life - my 1st fanfic.

[brookennickfan]

I love it!

[foreverbrookie]

Heh heh.. I LOVED Nick"s faux pas. Nice begining... I'm interested.. Let's hear some more!

[MissJr]

Futurebnbstar, first, welcome!

Second, you were WAY too modest! I'm thoroughly enjoying your fan fiction and I loved Nick's faux pas also. Hee heee! Surely, Taylor can't be that surprised?

Please give us more soon!

[GIOVANNA]

:)Awesome! I love the way Brooke has her support system around her. My big beef with the way this show is written is the fact that Brooke goes through her crises all alone when she has people who do care about her.

And good observation about Taylor defending Ridge. It is just typical the way Brooke gets the blame for Ridge and his duplicitous behavior.

[brickfan]

I love it. Great story

Constantine stared with longing eyes at Phoebe through the window in his studio. She was currently recording a solo titled "Maturity".

I..Phoebe...I haven't been using shampoo..for the past month." Constantine said in all honesty.



LOL these 2 are made for each other

Yeah Brooke go girl

[Horsey]

A very nice start futurebnbstar..

I like that Bridget and Rick are supporting their mother. As is should be and Nick certainly can be hot headed and let little things slip.

I can't wait for more. ;D Much better than the show

[Horsey]

???hmm.....very interesting. A little bit of mystery to go along with the comedy.

I wonder how Vijay is going to play into this.

I also like that you brought back dear Pammy, can we hope that she will aid in putting Steph in her place?

Can't wait for more, you're doing great!

[GIOVANNA]

:)Awesome, I want more!!

[GIOVANNA]

My opinion of post #17-Awesome!!!



I love the details, especially Brooke buying herself a new dress. Nothing like doing something for yourself after a blow.

[GIOVANNA]

futurebnbstar said:

giovanna said:

My opinion of post #17-Awesome!!!



I love the details, especially Brooke buying herself a new dress. Nothing like doing something for yourself after a blow.

Thanks! It's really fun to describe dresses and stuff like that so I'll keep including that in the story! I'm glad you liked it!

Oh, also include Brooke going to Starbucks or seeing a movie, as she needs to play in addition to working.

[foreverbrookie]

Somehow I think Vijay's instincts are right on the money as to who is the mystery man behind the meeting. Sure hope he makes it out of there with all his fingers and toes!

My Nick and Brooke seem to be a bit playfully flirting with each other! I like it!

I do think Stephanie is more than I tad bit jealous of her sister. LOL I hope she gives her something to really be jealous over! I mean why not if she's going to act that way anyway!

[MissJr]

What a fun and action-filled story!

I love Nick and Brooke's playful banter with one another and it's wonderful that she's getting her confidence back. There's nothing like an expensive frock and perfume to help in that regard. She certainly has no reason to feel ashamed or embarassed about bragging about her accomplishments. She deserves the praise and accolades as far as I'm concerned. A man certainly wouldn't be shy about touting his accomplishments and proving his worth! Poor Nick is probably going to find out that his wife's attitudes typically change based on her insecurities of the moment. I just hope he doesn't back down.

Stephanie is such a hateful wretch! Can they all just gang up on her and evict her from the house? How could any of them live with such a miserable human being? She kills Eric's joy at any given moment. She has poor Pammy making the beds, baking cookies and making lemonade; but, kills the poor thing's chances to dine out at the Cafe Russe. I guess Ann is lucky to be spared the old harpy's nastiness since she hardly ever leaves the guest house. How odd for Stephanie to complain about a lack of privacy since she doesn't hesitate to stick her beak into other folks' business and THEIR houses! I loved Eric's comeback to her about their supposed lack of privacy. I wondered the same thing: what do they actually do that warrants it?

Seems Eric has his hands full with Stephanie and now Jackie. I wonder if he would actually accept a job offer from Nick?

So THAT's why Constantine isn't friendly with shampoo and a comb! BTW--you had me howling because you described Phoebe's whininess perfectly! LOL! I also think it's hilarious that she's carrying on like this around Hope and RJ--two small children who have every reason to whine! The thought of Ridge, the virgin slayer, threatening someone for supposedly wanting his daughter's virginity is an irony too delicious to pass up. Let's see. He pressured Caroline and ultimately proposed to her because that was the only way he figured he could get her into bed. Brooke was also a virgin and he was her first. I would also venture to guess that a teenage Morgan was a virgin.

I loved Rick and the way he is defending his mother in your story! Onscreen it's like he lives in an alternate universe or something.

I also love the mystery surrounding Vijay and that warehouse.

Keep the installments coming!

[foreverbrookie]

Sooo.... The other one that we probably haven't guessed.. Has she been involved with the one that we've probably guessed?

[foreverbrookie]

Wow! Poor Vijay. I'm really feeling very sorry for him. I can't wait to find out what happened next with him and Elizabeth. Did prison harden him that much that'd kill Lizzy for denying him? Was it so sort of horrible accident? Is the daughter really her husbands child? And what happened to her?

Thank god Eric feels for Pamela. Steph is so evil to her sister. I hope Eric really kicks her butt right out of the house for good and takes up with Pam... They do have lots in common! And oh how that would burn Steph!

The baby is Brooke's! Now the question is what does Bridget do about it?

[foreverbrookie]

Ahhh that makes perfect sense about the girl!

Now I'm worried about poor Pammy! Whatever happens to her, I just know it will be Satans fault!

Dang this is getting reallly good!

[MissJr]

Excellent storytelling!

It seems that poor Pammy is living out her own Cinderella story. The problem is that it isn't an evil stepsister who's making her miserable. It's her own blood sister and the evil heifer has NO shame! Imagine being more concerned about a broken teacup than her sister! And you would think she would have used the opportunities Eric gave her to adjust her nasty, funky attitude but she kept right on persisting.

I love Eric telling her butt off and putting her out! That Pammy is certainly fully of surprises! What will Stephanie do now?

This baby storyline is really heating up! I would also like to see what Bridget does next and whether she'll be a standup gal.

I love Vijay's backstory and the way you fleshed his character out. I feel so sorry for him. I was stunned by Elizabeth's attitude!

I can't wait to see more and how all of this plays out!

[foreverbrookie]

futurebnbstar said:

foreverbrookie said:

Ahhh that makes perfect sense about the girl!

Now I'm worried about poor Pammy! Whatever happens to her, I just know it will be Satans fault!

Dang this is getting reallly good!

My last little addition should tell you QUITE A LOT about the girl, LOL! Pammy's incident is coming up!

Thanks for reading!

And BTW I'm getting an ID on the fanfiction board so I'll be commenting on all of For love or money chapters =]

WOW! Well.. I guess I know how the mystery person knows about Elizabeth now if I just read your clue correctly! OMG I feel so horrible for Elizabeth, Vijay and their daughter. I would hazzard to quess that "the father" put quite a spin on Vijay's actions. I would imagine Vijay's daughter has had nothing to do with him, and nothing but hatred (maybe too strong of a word considering) for him every since.

I have to wonder if Pammy is really coming back, it just seemed like a very poingant kiss goodbye.

It's all so sad, but very good! I can't wait for more.

And I'll be looking forward to your comments on the other board!

[MissJr]

Well, the plot thickens! I'm also putting the pieces together thanks to Vijay's backstory, but want to hear a little more before I jump to conclusions. What a sad and tragic ending! I can only imagine what the child was told especially if she was raised by her "father."

So is Pam really gone? Would Eric really let her go since he gets no real love from that glacial thing he's married to? Hearing Pam parrot what Stephanie said about her was painful. Doesn't Pam realize that it was Stephanie who got pregnant out of wedlock and seemingly didn't "know" who the father of her baby was? Or is there more to Pam that we don't know about as of yet?

I can't wait to read more!

[karen3012]

I really like your story futurebnbstar. I had to laugh a lot while I was reading the whole story so far, and I sincerely thank you for that.

I love the easy relationship that Bricky share and you definitely nailed one of the many problems with tacky, what on earth do they share or talk about (besides Brooke) when they are not going at it like the rabbits.

I don't think I'd mind Stephanie being such a hateful, vitriolic, violent and cruel person as she actually is on BnB and which you took a (small) step further if whe wasn't in the next scene depicted as society's beacon of morality and contender to the mommy of the year award. And somehow I doubt that will happen in your story.

Your Pammy really has me intrigued. I have the impression there is a lot more under that insecure, mousy surface than she gives away so far.

Poor Vijay he surely has been through a lot. I have my suspicions, but am really curious where this will lead.

[MissJr]

Thank you for taking up this story again, futurebnbstar!

I was horrified at the way Ridge treated those children! It was bad enough he spoke sharply to them. But to throw food at Hope like she was a dog is despicable! No amount of apologizing will make those children forget his cruelty.

I'm looking forward to Pam turning the tables on Stephanie and putting her in her place. So Taylor is showing her true colors, isn't she? That last statement of hers said it all. She still considers the Forresters her "family," and claiming that Nick "stole" the company from them is very telling. I can't wait to see how Nick handles this spontaneous outburst from the corspe bride.

Keep 'em coming! ;D

[GIOVANNA]

:)Awesome!

Man, Stephanie is a true-blue bitch from hell! How DARE she scream at Pam for her precious china. My heart breaks for Pam, imagine not only hearing those ugly, evil comments from a family member, but believing them as well.



And Ridge is such a creep. It is just like him to throw bread at a hungry child.

[tammievt]

thank you for picking this back up! Can't wait to read more.

[jilt]

Hmnn, looks like the author deleted this story. Wonder when that happened?